Untitled 10/Martha WIP

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I just would like some people to take a look at this and give me some pointers and criticism and help me out. I have all the details at my fic journal. I'll just say that it takes place between Family of Blood and Utopia and it's part of an ongoing series where an original character (also a time traveler) meets all the Doctor's incarnations.

No fancy cuts http://blazoningpen.livejournal.com/39684.html